Thursday, 26 November 2009

Two places I love

My favorite two places is Xi'an and Suzhou.
I grew up a place in xi'an, so I has deep feelings for this place,China is a long history of the ancient city of Xi'an. there are many footprints left by ancient scholars and paintings, A lot of people thought Xi'an, they can know the world-famous terra-cotta soldiers and horses, because that is one of the eight wonders and mentions Qin Dynasty intention to retain bright and modern.
The father in Suzhou, and so I live in Suzhou, slowly I got used to living in the South, where met many good friends, where private schools are to stay just the beginning so I do not habits, because there is no really stay too, so I do not like. But that is in Suzhou that I learned that independence is very important.

1 comment:

  1. Thanks Julia. Good post. Try to add pictures in future. It really helps when you are describing places.

    Some corrections:

    “I grew up a place in xi'an, so I has deep feelings for this place”

    We say ‘I grew up in (name of place).
    With ‘I,we.you.they’ I the present, the verb ‘have’ is used.

    ‘I grew up a place in xi'an, so I have deep feelings for this place’

    “A lot of people thought Xi'an, they can know the world-famous terra-cotta soldiers”

    Here, use ‘know’ not ‘think’. We use the phrase (place) is famous for (attraction)

    ‘A lot of people know Xi'an, it is world-famous for the terra-cotta soldiers’

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