life exprience:
in this week blog i would like to tell you about some of my expriences of travel .work and hobbies...
I comed here from IRAN,....I finish haigh school there..and came here for studying engilish and A-level....
this is about 1.5 mounth of the first day that I arrived LOndon,and I have been engilish yet....after finishing A_level i shoud start A-level and study more hard for accepting in a very good university...,
I think ,stiuding english and in a collage is a very good !,but after entrance in a gOOd university ,it is gonig to be very better and more lovly!!!...
forever,now I should try hard for accepting in a very good university...
I am enjoying of my life now,but i think it should goonig tobe better and better,
,It need to concentrate to my study and try more and more hard,
so I have desided to study more hard,althogh because of having just some reoson I hadnot work hard befor this day ,but now, I desid to do evrey thing better!...
Thanks Pegah. It’s good that you’ve decided to work harder.
ReplyDeleteTry to write about the topic for each week’s blog by following my model. You have given some opinions on study but you haven’t written about you life experiences.
Some corrections:
“I comed here from IRAN,....I finish haigh school there..and”
Remember ‘come’ is an irregular verb and ‘finish’ is regular.
‘I came here from IRAN,....I finished high school there and’
Try to check you spelling. There is no need to make so many mistakes when you can use ‘spell check’.
Desided desid befor evry reoson mounth