Thursday, 12 November 2009
life experiences
I have been hangzhou for a week , I go to thavel there , I have seen many beautiful sceneries . I went to there in summer , there are many lotus in the WestLake , they are so beautiful and have many colores . sometimes , ducks have came , it is look like a beautiful painting which you can see in the museum . I have gone to SuTi that is a long bridge on the WestLack , the same as BaiTi , they are biulded for commemorate Sushi and Baijuyi , I have gone to circle the lack by boat , that is vary happy , the sun is worm and the wind is kind , it is a great journey
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Well done Ray. I know it is difficult to join a new class and the other students have had more practice of ‘blogs’ than you. Next time look more carefully at the example and try to make the blog more interesting with photographs.
ReplyDeleteSome corrections.
“have been hangzhou for a week , I go to thavel there , I have seen many beautiful sceneries .”
This is a past experience which is finished and also you say how long you were there so we just use past simple here.
Also scenery is uncountable in English so we use ‘a lot of’ not ‘many’.
‘I went to Hangzhou for a week to travel there and I saw a lot of beautiful scenery .’
Try to use ‘spell checker’ to help you.
Thavel colores biulded
Some of your spelling errors also make other English words.
lack worm