In this week’s blog, I would like to tell you about some of my experiences of travel, work and hobbies.
I'm are student yet and I very dull , whatever my life or my stady...so sad , original I was studies in Hong Kong, but in my year.5 ,the once exam HKCEE(same as GCSE) I can't got enough mark so I can't got in year.6 ,finally I came to London to study foundation(might be) .
I very like to travel , but just in my childhood and only inside China , I lived in Hong Kong 17 years and sometime I will go back my countryside visite my grandmother .
I have three favourite hobbies : travel and swimming , I love travel because I want see the famous place and building , and I fond of swimming because I can feeling no gravity in the water and it's very cool if in the summer , so each summer time , I've gone to swimming pool or beach .
Thursday, 12 November 2009
My life
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Well done Heath. I hope your student life becomes less ‘dull’ and more ‘fun’ soon.
ReplyDeleteTry to use my example each week to give you help with grammar.
For example, in the final section about hobbies you could have used the ‘present perfect’ to say how long you have done these hobbies.
Some corrections:
“I'm are student yet and I very dull ,”
You have used ‘are’ and ‘am’ together. You only need ‘am’ here.
And when you say ‘yet’ do you mean ‘still’?
Also are you dull or is life dull?
‘I'm still a student and I it is very dull ,’
“I lived in Hong Kong 17 years and sometime I will go back my countryside visite my grandmother . “
You could use the present perfect here to show ‘unfinished’ activity.
Also, ‘sometime’ is a very American way to talk about the future. In Britain we use ‘one day’ more often.
“I want see the famous place and building , and I fond of swimming because…”
When we use ‘want’+verb, we use ‘want+to+verb’.
Also, when we use ‘fond of’ we say ‘to be fond of’.
‘I want to see the famous places and buildings , and I am fond of swimming because’