In this week's blog .I would tell you above some of my life and habits.study and hobbies.
I 've been studying now for 9 years .That's 8 years .but I was small as well. I've studied on primary school in China and hotels .As a student ,I 've studied for more than 3 schools ,becaue when I was 8 years old I was bad boy.
I've traveled quite in many and I 've journeied in China ,Japan, Britain ,I 've lived in China for 17 years and my family and house there. I prefer Japan than China ,because Japan is very clean and in the street you don't like at rubbish and quiet I've lived in Japan
I have two favourite hobbies; playing basketball and drawing .I 've learn paint for about 3 years .but I am still not very good at it .because I have't usually play it .some times I play basketball .when I was 15 years old I think it's good sports also I make a lot friends .It was the best thing I've ever done .
Now day I 've studied for Bellerbys for about 2 month.I've alot friends
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Well done Patrick. You have talked about a variety of experiences and, despite some problems with the perfect tense, you have used paragraphs and vocabulary well.
ReplyDeleteSome corrections:
“In this week's blog .I would tell you above some of my life and habits.study and hobbies.”
Use a comma rather than a full stop when you use an adverb at the start of a sentence.
When we use ‘I would’ to talk about intensions, we use the phrase ‘I would like to’.
The preposition with ‘tell’ is not ‘above’. Use ‘about’.
‘In this week's blog, I would like to tell you about some of my experiences, study and hobbies.’
“I've learn paint for about 3 years.”
Here, because we focus on the activity of learning and the quantity of time, If the activity is unfinished we use the continuous form.
Also after learn we use ‘to+verb’
“I've been learning to paint for about 3 years.”
“but I am still not very good at it .because I have't usually play it”
With negative habits, especially when we say ‘usually’, we use the simple form.
‘but I am still not very good at it because I don’t usually play it’