In this week's talk about my intentions in the short and long term.
This week I am visiting to France on Monday night so I' m going to call my friend and told to my partents if I come late they shoud't wait with me .
In about four weeks ,I' m going to Amercian because my young borther'll studying school at Amercian and I want to see my friends .I'll also be change house at hear so I'm going to return there to live with my friends so I'll also needing study English because I worried
about my talking is the worse than my friends and look like communicantion and something
This New year I am going to buy car and new computer if I have enough money .If I don't have money mabe I am going to buy food,I won't be able to buy there ,I am sad .
I try to imagine the year 2037 .I will be 46 years old by then I want to I'll sitll be alive and I have a good wife and a children I'll own my house ,I'll be happy with my life when I 'm 46 so I hope I'be great and I 'm going to work I have alot of friends look likes me.I'll also be
successful women
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Well done Patrick,
ReplyDeleteYou have used this week’s grammar very effectively. It sounds like an interesting future.
Some corrections:
“This week I am visiting to France..”
We follow ‘visit’ directly with the object.
‘This week I am visiting France..’
“so I'll also needing study English because I worried
about my….”
We always follow ‘will’ with the infinitive of the verb without ‘to’
‘Need’ is usually followed by the infinitive of the verb with ‘to’.
The state ‘worried’ needs the verb ‘to be’
‘so I'll also need to study English because I am worried
about my ……’
"I'll also be successful women."
we connect 'successful' to a perso using 'with'
'I'll also be successful with women.'