There are two places where I have spent a lot of my life. I have lived in London for quite a few month and also I have many years spent in Hong Kong. I love both places because there had aolt of aoubt my remembrance.
I was born in Hong Kong where have my family , friends so on. Also I love Hong Kong because it had a lot of places for shopping and waste my time , and Hong Kong have many high building , but it's bad for many people , because had a too much air can't flow , and make the air pollution, but there still is my favor place.
In london it's a big city where have many people lived there , and I was studying in London a few month , there are a few places to go , maybe I not enough years age , so plenty of places I can't entry , but I don't care that because remain a few weekend I will going to Hong Kong.
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Good work Heath, you have tried hard to use the example to help you. Good blogging this term. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteSome corrections:
“I have lived in London for quite a few month and also I have many years spent in Hong Kong.”
Remember here ‘month’ is plural. Don’t forget the ’s’.
Also, time phrases like ‘many years’ generally go after the verb ‘spend’.
‘I have lived in London for quite a few months and also I have spent many years in Hong Kong’
“In london it's a big city where have many people lived there”
Here you have too many subjects and objects. You only need one.
‘London(it) is a big city where many people live (there).’
“but I don't care that because remain a few weekend I will going to Hong Kong.”
‘care’ usually takes the preposition ‘about’. Also, to talk about the future you can say ‘in a few + noun(s)’. Finally ‘going to’ takes the verb ‘to be’ not ‘will’.
‘but I don't care about that because in a few weekends I am going to Hong Kong.’