Henan is a beautiful city and has a long history. China has seven ancient capital of Henan, there are three citier. Respectively,It's devided into the Luoyang, Kaifeng, and Anyang. As the location of Luoyang is the perfect place for emperors. Luoyang have many places of interest moments, such as Longmen Grottoes, White Horse Temple. However, the most famous in Luoyang, China's national flower is the peony. Kaifeng have a lot of snacks, but I must mention is the Kaifeng, the Temple. Anyang is one of China's ancient capital, which is one of the birthplace of the Chinese Oracle, the largest bronze in the world.
Now,the economic development is very fast and Henan becoming more and more modern, I think the future will get better and better in Henan.
Well done Ivy, you have done very well in the blogs this term and your writing has improved.
ReplyDeleteSome corrections:
“Henan is a beautiful city and have a long history. China has the seven ancient capital of Henan, there are three city.”
Look at the sentence again. Which words are singular and which are plural? How does that change the grammar of the sentence?
‘Henan is a beautiful city and has a long history. China has seven ancient capitals of Henan, there are three cities.’
Now look at your examples of ‘have’ in the text. Some should be ‘has’.
“the location of Luoyang is the perfect place to emperors.”
‘Perfect’ is usually followed by the preposition ‘for’
‘the location of Luoyang is the perfect place for emperors.’
“Now, the economic development very fast, Henan more and more modern”
Notice you have no verbs in these clauses. Remember you need to use verbs in English.
‘Now, the economic development is very fast and Henan is becoming more and more modern’