I have studyed ELPP2 in bellerbys college London . Original I don't want going to ELPP2 because I think this is a waste my time and money , so when I knew I need study ELPP2 I was very disappointed for myself and unhappy
Of course , I can't change the real , I still need going to ELPP2 , and also my brother told me it's may improve my English , Grammar so on . I know my brother is comfort me and made me happy .
In ELPP2 , we have three teacher Julse , John and celia ,they are very nice and funny in the class , although too many students speaking country language that the tutors were very angry . And me ? I very like my teachers because they are interesting and at the same time ,they improve my English , but I'm not smart so they are too much difficult to teach me .
Now is very close holiday , and if I can luckily pass my last exam I will get in business foundation ,so I think I will miss my ELPP live and teacher.I hope my teacher will teach me again , but it's at the foundation courses.
Although I will came back after Christmas , but don't know why I have some feeling I never come back here .
By the way , I hope see ye again.
Well done Heath. I always like reading your blog entries. They are very interesting and you express yourself well.
ReplyDeleteI hope I see you again in future too. Enjoy your holiday.
Some corrections:
“I have studyed ELPP2 in bellerbys college London”
With two syllable vers which end with ‘y’, we usually make the past with ’ied’
Also, we say ‘at’ with places like companies and schools. And we use CAPITAL letters for the names of places and companies etc.
‘I have studied ELPP2 at Bellerbys College London’
“I was very disappointed for myself”
When we say disappointed we can say ‘in’ or ‘about’ or ‘with’ but not ‘for’.
Here, you need to use ‘with’ or ‘in’ .
‘I was very disappointed in myself’
“ I very like my teachers because they are interesting”
To make verbs stronger, we use adverbs like ‘really’ not ‘very’. ‘Very’ is used to make adjectives and adverbs stronger.
‘ I really like my teachers because they are interesting’
“Although I will came back after Christmas , but don't know why I have some feeling I never come back here .”
Here you have used ‘but’ and ‘although’. You only need one.
‘Although I will came back after Christmas, I don't know why I have some feeling I never come back here .’
Or
‘I will came back after Christmas , but I don't know why I have some feeling I never come back here .’