This is my last blog for Autumn term ,I only have 2 weeks. This is my last two weeks, and I will return to China, I am happy, but at the same time I have to face is a very important exam for me, my next semester's plan is to read matriculation classes, though, I think their English is not very good, but returned to China I will be very hard to learn English, my family are very confident that I was encouraged by many people, like my mother, and she told me to study well class do not be late so I think time look like money important. and then my plan is: in the future, I wanted to be a scientist, doing good for our country. However, if the current situation is concerned, first of all, I would like to complete their studies in order to plan the next step. I am very pleased to be able to recognize so many friends, and teachers. So, the next semester, I will be more efforts to study and participate in some club activities, know more friends.
Thanks Patrick. Your blogs this term have been excellent and I can see an improvement in your English. Good luck next year.
ReplyDeleteSome corrections:
“This is my last two weeks, and I will return to China”
This looks like ‘a plan’ or an ‘intention’. You have your ticket. In this situation use ‘to be going to’ or present continuous.
‘This is my last two weeks, and I’m returning to China’
Or
‘This is my last two weeks, and I’m going to return to China’
“I have to face is a very important exam for me.”
‘face’ is quite complicated to use here. We say ‘to face the fact that subject+verb’
‘I have to face the fact that this is a very important exam for me’
“next semester I will be more efforts to study and participate in some club activities”
With ‘effort’ we usually use ‘make’ and it is usually uncountable.
‘Next semester, I will make more effort to study and participate in some club activities’