I am 18 years old, I've been London 1 month. I am going to study language 3 month, then I will study foundation in next year . My specialty is the mass media, the year of matriculation in my profession to learn and I would like into a good university, this is my immediate goal and it is my mother of my expectations.
Into the university,I am going to study media begin my formal learning, I hope 3 years to finish my university studies, but also hope that college life is more exciting and full of color. Give me leave a good impression and wonderful memories, in the last year, I will try to admitted graduate students, this is my most funny thing, because the whole family will be cheered for me.
Then I can come back my country.
Thanks Julia. I hope your study plan goes well and you enjoy your time here studying. Try to add some pictures or video to your blogs to make them more interesting.
ReplyDeleteSome corrections:
“I've been London 1 month.”
There are two adverbs in this sentence; one for place and one for time.
With towns we usually use the preposition ‘in’ and with periods of time we use the preposition ‘for’.
‘I've been in London for 1 month.’
You translate a lot from your own language. This does not usually work and makes it difficult to correct your work.
“it is my mother of my expectations.”
This is meaningless in English. The phrase does not translate.
‘This is my main ambition’
“I will try to admitted graduate students”
You cannot admit yourself as a graduate so here we use the passive.
‘I will try to be admitted as a graduate student’