Two palce I Love:
there are two place where I have spent my life.:
I spent about 18 yeras old in IRAN ,and now I have been in engils(London) about 2 months.
I love London because it has gOOd nashnality university ,and I need to be here for learning english,and then A-level and after that university...
It is an interesting exprience to live in another country with your self!...
althogh I miss my family and it is very hard for me.
bute I have purpose and I shoul work hard to get that better and better....
I think so london is a gOOd country for living but live with our citizen is relay better and more lovly..
it has gOOd train and bus servis but i think have a car here ,can not do yor life very easier if you are not a reach person!!!
forever ,London and each country ,that you want live there for spesefic porpuse,
have good and bad things .
Thanks Pegah. You have improved your blogs a lot. Try to add some pictures to make them a little more interesting.
ReplyDeleteSome errors:
Spelling. You often use the correct ‘vowel’ letters (a,e,I,o,u) in the wrong order.
“Palce, exprience, years”
Use a dictionary to check and keep a note of which words you need to learn.
“I spent about 18 yeras old in IRAN ,and now I have been in engils(London) about 2 months.”
Remember ‘English’ is an adjective. The noun is ‘England’. This is true for most countries.
Also, with quantities of time use ‘for’
‘I spent about 18 years in IRAN ,and now I have been in England (London) for about 2 months.’