In this blog, i want to talk about my favorite places in Russia.
Firstly, i talk about my favorite city. My favorite city Yekaterinburg. In this city, i was born and grew up. Yekaterinburg is the capital of the Ural mountin. The population of Yekaterinburg equal 2 million people. Yekaterinburg has many beatiful places. Currently Yekaterinburg it has winter and the whole city in snow. When i going to in Yekaterinburg in December, i can see a 
very beatiful show by the pieces of ice. Also, i like the Main square, when it is cold outside, my friends and i go to a lovely rsaraunt ''Pizza Mia''.
very beatiful show by the pieces of ice. Also, i like the Main square, when it is cold outside, my friends and i go to a lovely rsaraunt ''Pizza Mia''.Now, i tell about my second lovely places. It's small countryside city Kasli. Population of Kasli is only 5000 people. It's a very beatiful city, it has a beatiful park and a small lake, where many 
people fish. Else Kasli has very famous factory wich manufactures iron products. My grandparents have big cotagge in Kasli and i often go to visit. Cotagge stay near small forest, where there is many animal: sqirrels,foxes and budgers.
people fish. Else Kasli has very famous factory wich manufactures iron products. My grandparents have big cotagge in Kasli and i often go to visit. Cotagge stay near small forest, where there is many animal: sqirrels,foxes and budgers.
Good work again Vlad. Well done for all your work this term. Your blogs always look great, with lots of pictures.
ReplyDeleteSome corrections:
“Currently Yekaterinburg it has winter and the whole city in snow”
We don’t usually use ‘have’ with seasons like winter and summer.
We say ‘it is (season) in (place).
Also, after a subject “the whole city” there must be a verb.
‘Currently, it is winter in Yekaterinburg and the whole city is under snow’
“near small forest, where there is many animal”
‘many’ is for plural countable nouns so the verb ‘to be’ must be plural and so must the noun ‘animals’.
‘near a small forest, where there are many animals’