My Hometown is Jingyin.It near the Shanghai.The Yangtze River flows through this city.There are many famous people were born in this example:Liu Tian-hua and Xu Xia-ke. Jinagyin have a big bridge is Yangtze Highway Bridge .Jiangyin Yangtze River Highway Bridge is a large suspension bridge, the main bridge length of 2068.88m, of which the main cross-1385m, north cross-336.5m, south across 309.34m, north and south anchor span 19.02 m, is currently China's first, the world's fourth largest suspension bridge.There are have mang beautiful park.In the morning and night have many people go for a walk,the children can play kite in here.I love my hometown.Welcome to my hometown !
Well done Hugh. Try to practise writing as much as you can next term. Good luck! Also, try to include some pictures to make the text more interesting.
ReplyDeleteSome corrections:
“There are many famous people were born there’
Here, ‘many famous people’ is the object of ‘are’ and the subject of ‘were born’. You need to use ‘who’
‘There are many famous people who were born there’
“There are have mang beautiful park”
Here you need to use ‘place+has+many’ or ‘there+are+many’. Also ‘park’ is countable so you need to use the plural.
‘There are many beautiful parks’