Thursday, 1 October 2009
My second weekend in London
I 'm a new student from Hong Kong . It's my second time in the UK . I met are some new friends on 9-9-09....I start to have a lesson , and on 14-09-09 I went to Chinatown shopping and eating , so expensive .....but I still like it there because I was homesick ,so I could get the Hong Kong feel from Chinatown , then at about 8:00 pm arrive in my accommdation...shower...sleep until 11:30 am....because I was very tired...in next day , I stay my room all day ,do my homework and play computer......
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Nice to see you have found a place that reminds you of home. I hope you feel less homesick as time goes on.
ReplyDeletesome corrections:
"I met are some new friends"
The 'are' is not necessary here.
"I met some new friends"
English is quite strict. You need to include subjects and verbs in written work.
"I went to Chinatown shopping and eating , so expensive .."
I went to Chinatown shopping and eating and it was so expensive ..