My first time came to london was on the 1st of September 2009. It was in this summer. I came to london for study. The first time i was with my sister, so i wasn't very worry, beacuse my sister's english is very well. She had been studyed in london for 8 years already.
We arrived in london around 8.00 o'clock in the evening and we were very tired and hungry. because we had 10 hours flight from Beijing to London .We did the first thing is went to the restaurant after we went out of the airport. Then we were full. We went to my sister's friend's home. We lived there at that night. This was my first night in london.I think is was so bring and tired .
On the second day, we got up at 9.00 o'clock , we need found new home in london for ourself. 3 days later, we found a new house, then we moved form my sieter's friend's house to the new house. After we moved to the new house . we went to the restaurant in china town . That was my first came to china town . it's was so cool and a lot of people over there. I really like there.
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Well done Kevin. It sounds like a stressful time but you managed to settle in eventually.
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"Then we were full. We went to my sister's friend's home. We lived there at that night. This was my first night in london.I think is was so bring and tired ."
Then we were full so we went to my sister's friend's home where We stayed that night. Because this was my first night in london, I think is was so bring and tired .