I went to London in 24th June which is my aunt's birthday and it's my first time in London,so I was so amazed.I have been travelling for a long time,it's ten hours and a half ,then I saw my aunt in the airport.
We arrived at my aunt's house , My cousins were waiting for us.Then I had a tour of my aunt's house which is a big house and very beautiful, it has seven rooms including a piano room,a kitchen, four bedrooms ,a workroom and a garden.I have a big bedroom , I like it.
My cousins made a cream cake for my aunt and we have a sumpyuous dinner.Time difference made me very tired.When I finished dinner I went to bed.
Next day when I waked up I saw my cousins surrounding me in my bed, it's so sweet.
I'm really into my new life in London.
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It must be nice to have family here. It sounds like you are having a good time.
ReplyDeleteWhen you are telling a story you can use different tenses together to make the narrative more natural. Look at the example below from your story.
"We arrived at my aunt's house , My cousins were waiting for us."
"When we arrived at my aunt's house, My cousins were waiting for us."
Notice how I use 'when....... , (comma)....... .(full stop)
Can you find more places where you can do this in your text.