Monday, 26 October 2009
Different Between Hong Kong and England
Hong Kong is smaller than England and England is bigger than Hong Kong. Hong kong food is cheaper than England and England food is more expensive than Hong Kong .Hong Kong in the winter isn't cool but England in the winter is cool.England has alots build is shorter than Hong Kong builds.Hong Kong is speak chinese ,England is speak english.In the winter Engla nd will have snow but Hong Kong never will have .Hong Kong have more peoples than England.In Hong Kong by underground is easier than England.England by underground is more difficulty than Hong Kong . This is about different between Hong Kong and England
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This is much better Calvin. Most importantly, you are using the grammar from the classes this week to complete the blog.
ReplyDeleteYou have made some nice 'comparative' sentences.
Some corrections:
We don’t make a compound noun “England food”
Instead we use the adjective before the noun ‘English food’.
Try to use words like ‘and’ and ‘but’ to help the reader understand.
For example in this sentence,
“ Hong Kong is speak chinese ,England is speak English”
You can use ‘but’
‘In Hong Kong people speak chinese but, in England, they speak english’
Remember to use capital letters for languages.
‘Chinese’ and ‘English’