Thursday, 8 October 2009

My first day in London

My first day in London. My first arrived in London, was passing through.But i could see many intresting things in London.I went in England because i wanted lerned English language.But my school was in other citi, and i and my mother decided went to London, because we wanted to saw sights this citi.First, we went in British musem, this musem very big and intresting, unfortunately we could saw only small part this musem, because we very got tired.So we went to Hyde park that did relax.This park very beatiful, it had many trees, animals, and herbages.Next we went, in Oxford street, because we wanted bought clothes.So i boght many goos clothes.In the evening, went in my school , in Bormunt.
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1 comment:

  1. Good post Vlad. Sounds like an interesting visit. Try to be careful with your spelling. Here are some words which you have spelt incorrectly. Use a dictionary to check them and make a note of them in your vocabulary book.

    citi
    musem
    intresting
    beatiful

    Notice how vowel sounds are causing the problem. There need to be more letters in these words.
    boght

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