30 8 2009 i arrived London HEATHROW airopt . when my feet walking this road .i have been attraction by this city .it too beautful. it's a free city .in that day it's my uncle and his friend take me from airport . his friend is England peole. he very funny and friendlly
My uncle took me to his house and in afternoon he take me to a italy restruant with his friend near the tamesa river. in there i have seen the london bridge and the London eyes .it's so beautful . the food also very good .i choose a italy noodles and a pizza . but it too expensive . at last i taken many photograph . and my uncle also took me to the china town bought some bedline. even the china town not better than relly china shopping street .but iam very like there .because china town have much chinese . when i seen chinese people my heart very happy .because here is England. you know in other country could see our country people it's a happy things.
Maby at 8 clock we are go back home . in the car i see many people take some beer outside the pub .they were looks very happy . when i arrived house i were very tirred .so iam very early go bed .
it's a beautful city and a happy day
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So does your uncle live here in London? It's nice to have family here with you!
ReplyDeleteYour story is good but you use 'full stops' too much. Compare this example with mine below.
"i choose a italy noodles and a pizza . but it too expensive . at last i taken many photograph . and my uncle also took me to the china town bought some bedline. even the china town not better than relly china shopping street .but iam very like there .because china town have much chinese ."
I chose Italian noodles and a pizza but it was too expensive. I took many photographs and my uncle also took me to China town where we bought some bedlinen. China town is not really better than a Chinese shopping street but iam very like there because there are many Chinese people.
Now look at your text again. Can you take more 'full stops' away?