The story was beginns around 700 year ago , the England , Scotland , Ireland all from United kingdom and the story situation was happen between England and Scotland . The king of England (Edward I) want to choose the new king for Scotland , but people not be willing to ,so they rebel and fought with England .
The protagonist (William Wallace) his father and old brother died in the war when William 7 year age. Then William follow his uncle (Argyle) living , year later , William fall in love one girl (Murron) and Murron love William too . But one day , Edwand I want rule Scotland quickly ,then he order bring back the old rule of "first night" - a girl who lives on a noble's land must spend her wedding night with the noble od the land , not with her husband , so William and Murron only can secretly to married ,nobody knew just their friends knew that . Once the England soldiers caught Murron because she was very beautiful ,but Murron rebel and William fought with England soldies , William shouted call Murron escape and William escaps too , unlackily Murron was be cought back , and be killed from head of soldies ,William was very sad ,angry.and start rebel , he rode to the head of soldies location and killed him...
Afterward , Edward I send twenty thousuand army fought with William , but William only two thousuand army ,but he still won this war and then he make First Lord of Scotland ....althought that ,but William still be cought by Edwand I ,beasuse William 's friend father betray William .
In the end of the story , William was died and before that ,he cried out "WE WILL BE FREE!"
In my sentiment I think this story very hot-blooded , their are fight of the war and rebel the Endland , it's touch my heart , and I know as a result of this war , until right now , the Scotland and Ireland still not like England...
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Heath.
ReplyDeleteI am glad you enjoyed the book. You have clearly spent a lot of time reading and understanding the book. You have summarised the story in your own words very well.
Some corrections:
“The story was beginns around 700 year ago”
If you use the present you don’t need ‘was’ and we spell the verb ‘begins’ with one ‘n’.
If you use the past just use ‘began’.
“the story situation was happen between England and Scotland”
To say where a story happens we use ‘is set’
‘the story situation is set in England and Scotland’.
“The king of England (Edward I) want to choose the new king for Scotland , but people not be willing to ,so they rebel and fought with England .”
If we don’t agree we fight ‘against’ someone.
But
If we agree we fight ‘with’ them.
People “not be”
We say: ‘people aren’t’
“William fall in love one girl (Murron) and Murron love William too . But one day , Edwand I want rule Scotland quickly ,then he order bring back the old rule of "first night"
William and Murron and Edward are all singular subjects like ‘he’ and ‘she’.
If you use the present tense you need to put an ‘s’ on the verb.
“William falls in love one girl (Murron) and Murron loves William too . But one day , Edwand I wants to rule Scotland quickly ,then he orders bring back the old rule of "first night"