Bi Sheng, was born in 990AD - -death in 1051 AD. Bisheng who lived in china' s capital Bianliang during the Northern in China he was peasant .Bisheng was the inventor of the first known good paper . Bi Sheng's type was made of baked clay and was invented between 1041 and 1048 in China. he was scholar ,he studied about Chinese history and he is good teacher in the China ,he is very famous in the world .
I think he was the inventor of the paper help with people understand above paper history and contributes direclty to paper development ; this technology effect a lots of the country which is important to people .I guess now day we are written a letters and newspaper, something was paper aloft of was paper so it's important if he didn't inventors paper nowday we don't have a culture,because in the ancient times about culture may be written the paper .
Well done Patrick, you have chosen a good inventor to talk about and included a nice picture.
ReplyDeleteNext time, try to use my model to help you.
You have not really included much information about his life which would be interesting for the reader. How did he become an inventor?
Some notes on errors.
“now day”
We use the phrase ‘nowadays’ or ‘these days’
When we imagine the past we make ‘if’ sentences differently.
“if he didn't inventors paper nowday we don't have a culture”
‘if he hadn’t invented paper nowadays we wouldn’t have a culture’
Study does not take a preposition
“he studied about Chinese history”
‘he studied Chinese history’