This weekend, i read very intersting book:BRAVEHEART. This book about strong, Scottish man, his name William Walace.
In childhood, he wanted to be very good fighter and go with his dad in battle with England, but dad told him that he else very small.In one battle, died William's dad and brother.And Willim started live with his uncle Argyle. In a few years William went in his native village, because he wanted make a family with her girl friend Marron and live peacefully. But once time on his village attacked by English soldiers and killed his girl friend.And he did detachment against England.And he was supported by many Scottish clans.Wallace scored several victories over British troops but during the Battle of Scottish Folkerkskoy aristocracy betraying Wallace and he is won.William talked with Scottish princes and future Scottish king (Robert I), because he wanted to set help from aristocrasy.But Roberts father did ambushed and William was captured by British soldiers.In London he was sentenced to publicly death.His last word was:FREEDOM!
I advise you to read this book, because this book very intresting and teaches us to love freedom and homeland.
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Vlad,
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I like your recommendation.
Good work!!
Some corrections:
“This book about strong, Scottish man, his name William Walace.”
Remember to add verbs to the sentence. All English sentences have verbs.
This book is about strong, Scottish man, his name is William Walace.
“he wanted to be very good fighter and go with his dad”
In situations like this, use ‘father’ instead of ‘dad’.
“In a few years William went in his native village, because he wanted make a family with her girl friend Marron and live peacefully.”
Here we use the phrase ‘after a few years’ not ‘in’.
We ‘have’ families not ‘make’ them
“But once time on his village attacked by English soldiers and killed his girl friend”
We don’t need to say ‘once time’ we usually say just ‘once’
Also the soldiers attacked his village so we can us e the passive.
‘Once his village was attacked by soldiers’