I'm arrived in the London in 8 September.I was meeting a taxi driver in airport,which take me to house,when I will live in during my study.
In the journey he talked with me about sights of the London,commodities and other.
When we came at my residence,I was meeting Remi.Remi - is owner of house,when I'm live.She is wery good women and she always give me advices,when I'm need them.
This is a first night in London.Let me talk about first day in London!
So,I'm got up at 8 o'clock at the morning and I'm will must go to the Bellerbys College.But how it is carry out?At that time I don't knew how I can get the Bellerbys College! Therefore Remi asked an one student from Litvenia ,show me a way to the College.After she and I went to the Bellerbys.
In the College I had a test,which checked my level of language.After the test,I get acquainted with Bellerbys College,and I was glad.
I was very glad in my first day in London.And in that day I found an answers for more questions,which I had.
That was my first day in London!!!
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I'm glad you're happy in london. Remi sounds like a really good person to know!
ReplyDeleteTry to keep punctuation tidy. We usually leave a space after a punctuation mark.
Compare your original with my corrections.
"When we came at my residence,I was meeting Remi.Remi - is owner of house,when I'm live.She is wery good women and she always give me advices,when I'm need them."
"When we came at my residence, I was meeting Remi, who is the owner of house, where I'm living. She is a very good women and she always gives me advice, when I'm need it."
'Advice' is uncountable in English!