Set in the 13th centry 'Braveheart' is the story of one Scotland's greatest national ,the first years of the long uitimatelly successful struggle to free Scotland from English the rule,it is about 700 age years at the Scotland's story next to the England.Scotland had no king but I think England had queen she is famous .The old king died without a son or daughter the English king . nowday along with the economy development more and more people like pursueing free,look like Scotland's people ;in the 13th cengtry Scotland in order to protection there's life and their family ,in order to their free.fight with the England
William Wallace died slowly in front of a great crowd on 23 August,1305.They did terrible things to his body so that he would ask for forgiveness ,but he would not .
I think William Wallace had a lot of brave and luckly.
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Patrick.
ReplyDeleteI am glad you enjoyed the book but try not to just copy text from the introduction. This is called plagiarism and it is very serious if you do this at college or university.
“William Wallace died slowly in front of a great crowd on 23 August,1305.They did terrible things to his body so that he would ask for forgiveness ,but he would not .”
I can see immediately that this is not your work. I cannot pass you if you copy like this.
Some corrections:
“nowday” this is always written ‘nowadays’
“I think William Wallace had a lot of brave and lucky.”
Brave and lucky are adjectives so you need to use the verb ‘to be’ not ‘have’
I think William Wallace was very brave and lucky.