The first time i went to London was in the summer holiidays about one years ago and I went with my cousin .The taxi was very expensive,so we by train went to London .we arrived at 11o'clock in the morning.we stayed in London for 1 week ,we were going to shopping and went to chinese restruant. In the night we were going to my cousin friends house sleep. on monday day i went to pack played football with my cousin and friends and then we were going to chinese restuant again. on tuesday night i and my cousin went to china town of cinema saw film and by train went to oxford see build and went to home.
My first time went to london i so happy .
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OK Calvin. I think you can do more than this with your blog. Try to use interesting words to describe how you felt.
ReplyDeleteTry to keep your punctuation tidy!
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.The taxi was very expensive,so we by train went to London .we arrived at 11o'clock in the morning.we stayed in London for 1 week ,we were going to shopping and went to chinese restruant. I..
. The taxi was very expensive, so we by train went to London. We arrived at 11 O'clock in the morning. We stayed in London for 1 week, we were going to shopping and went to chinese restruant. I