Hi , I'm Alex .I am come from China.Let me introduce the cuisine of my country.China is the one of the longest history in the world.By the time,the cuisine of china is becoming more and more delicious and variety.Now the chinese food become more and more popular because of the material of the food is healthy ,colourful ,smellful and delicious.
Better Alex. Try to use the examples from the lesson and the grammar from this week’s classes. Remember I asked you to ‘compare’ your country with Britain. You talk about China but you don’t say anything about food in England. You only have about 60 words here which is not enough to pass the task. You could say more about the food in England.
ReplyDeleteSome errors:
“I am come from China”
We usually just say
‘I come from China.’
We don’t have an adjective ‘smellful’ we say…
‘the food smells delicious’