This is a blog for all the members of this Autumns class.
Friday, 25 September 2009
my week
This weeks i in the school very happy and met many new friend,and i played basketball with friends. every day i with my friends eating and studying. i am very happy.i like bellerbys college,because here the teachers are nice and very kind .
Teacher comment
ReplyDeleteNice to see that you are happy and that you are making new friends.
Try to use 'I' to talk about yourself not 'i'
Also 'this week'should be singular and 'many new friends' should be plural.